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Tuesday, 11 October 2016

A Long Way Down - Editing into Paragraphs

L.I: to write narrative paragraphs using Topic sentence, Details, Concluding sentence. Today for Writing Mr Wong's groups worked with Ms McClain instead. My group Te Ika a Maui, worked on narrative paragraphs. We had to rewrite our story from W9 T3 into paragraphs using a topic sentence, details and concluding sentence. Before we edited we had to take a screenshot, then after we edited our writing.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Angari
    I like your Narrative about an Adventure I liked the part you guy's were on the Plane.
    Keep up the Great Learning

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