Today I wrote a piece of writing about me. I did this because I wanted people to know me better. I learnt more things about my class mates that I did not know before.
All about me
My name is Angari. I was born in Auckland, New Zealand, but my culture is Samoan. I am a student at Panmure Bridge School. I want to talk about my family and friends, my favourite things and what kind of Music I like to play.
My Family includes my parents, my sisters, my cousin and my nana. They are important to me because they are always there for me when I am not feeling well or if I am feeling uncomfortable. My friends are Inotia, Mia, Mya, Mishaan, Javeylor and Irys.They are important to me because when I am lonely they are always asking if I would like to play with them and they are really funny so when I am sad they always make sure I have a smile on my face.
I like to travel a lot overseas for a very long time,I like to drink smoothies and I like to be on the computer a lot.Traveling is important because I get to meet other people especially different people.It is good to interact with people because you can’t just get along with the same person that is like you. Music is very important in my life. Piano is what I normally play.I like to play
a jazzy piece of music and classical. I also play Recorder, Guitar and
Ukulele. My Family has only played two instruments from the past years and they are Piano and Guitar. They have been in my family history for a very long time.
Good writing Angari. You have written a lot of detail and explained why things are important to you. I think you're missing a conclusion though.
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